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Wednesday 14 December 2016

Nyesha's Persuasive writing

I believe people should not bring scooters to school only when you are going to school and if it is wheels day.


Scooters are fun to play on but people can’t control their scooters and scooters are dangerous. When scooters go fast the solid metal on the scooter could injure the rider or someone who is looking. The small children who are not watching the rider that is riding the scooter are in danger.

The scooters dominate the playground because they need lots of room to go fast and over jumps. Other organised games need room too like netball and hockey. If the scooters are using the same part of the playground these games get interrupted.

Scooters are a really dangerous sport. The rider can lose control of their scooter and it could hurt little kids who are watching. Often kids do not wear safety gear because they can’t be bothered or it might take too long to put it on. The rider learns a lot of tricks and jumps and other things with their scooter that means the rider will hit someone.

I believe that scooters should be banned from the playgrounds.

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